17A- Elevator Pitch No.2
Reflection on Feedback: Unfortunately I was unable to upload a first elevator pitch because my laptop was broken and was in the middle of getting fixed. I know, bad planning because I did do this last minute. But I am planning ahead this week.
What has changed based on feedback: I am doing this much more ahead of time this week!
Delaney,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed listening to your elevator pitch! I think you have a brilliant idea - an idea that could bring you fortunes in the future. I can honestly agree with you in the idea that trying to get paper towels out of a dispenser is the worst thing in the world. It is very annoying to wait anxiously while your hands are wet and then 1 tiny piece of paper comes out. Your idea is logical, economical, and also environmentally acceptable. People using less paper to dry their hands will really help the environment and create a sustainable place for humans in the future to live. Thanks for sharing!
Alec
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ReplyDeleteI really liked hearing about your elevator pitch about this idea! I definitely would be an advocate for it. You spoke with articulation; therefore, making it easy for me to understand what you were saying. Also, I feel that you captured my attention from the beginning with your opening question. Your idea is very feasible and I really like that about it!
Hi Delaney,
ReplyDeleteYour business idea is so thoughtful and innovative. I personally go through the struggle of having to use multiple paper towels to dry my hands yet they are never dry enough. Clearly you had created a great solution that not only benefits the user but also the environment. The durability of your product will make using wasteful amounts of paper a thing of the past. Great job on this elevator pitch!
Hello, I enjoyed your video about solving the issue with paper towels in today’s society. Coming up with a solution that will help use less paper and therefore help the environment is something I can help stand behind. This idea will also help costs since it is a cheaper product then what’s on the market today. I also liked that this was rehearsed which means good planning.
ReplyDeleteHi Delaney,
ReplyDeleteThis was a very good elevator pitch, as it was professional and concise while giving an overview of your idea. Your idea is creative and useful, and you were able to turn that into a great pitch. Like you, I did not submit a first elevator pitch, so this was my first time doing it, and I think you did an excellent job.