The feedback I received in my last elevator speech was very positive! So I only made a few tweaks in my speech in order for it to be more clear. I definitely think my speech is almost memorized at this point!
Again, I feel that there is only positive things to say about your speech because it is good! You were articulate, and detailed. I think that you have this speech down packed as well. Each time i have heard your speech, you keep getting better and better! It is good to hear the you made more tweaks to your speech so that you could be more clear to your audience. It shows that you care that they understand.
Hello, I still like the idea about the upgraded paper towel. This will help with wasted paper towels used in today’s market. By only using one paper towel, people will be able to use less and the company will save money. I like it was apparent that you rehearsed your speech because you spoke it very well! On mine I tried doing it on the fly which was not as good as yours!
Hey Delaney,
ReplyDeleteAgain, I feel that there is only positive things to say about your speech because it is good! You were articulate, and detailed. I think that you have this speech down packed as well. Each time i have heard your speech, you keep getting better and better! It is good to hear the you made more tweaks to your speech so that you could be more clear to your audience. It shows that you care that they understand.
Hello, I still like the idea about the upgraded paper towel. This will help with wasted paper towels used in today’s market. By only using one paper towel, people will be able to use less and the company will save money. I like it was apparent that you rehearsed your speech because you spoke it very well! On mine I tried doing it on the fly which was not as good as yours!
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